[Week 11] SELF EVALUATION

1. What score do you think you deserve?
2 points because I followed the form of persuasive essay well and gave rich supporting evidences and ideas. Also, My conclusion has a sense of disclosure which can make people agree with me.


2. What did you do well and what could you do better?
a) First, I think that I did persuade people to agree with my thesis in creative way because I suggested the limitation of behaviorism by giving the limitation of positivism. Second, I suggested rich evidences which show the limitation of behaviorism. Third, I suggested the alternative of behaviorism which can help psychologists to understand inner mechanism such as dream more completely.

b) I think that I repeated my thesis too much in my 1st draft. I will remove logical surplus in my essay and make my essay simpler and more logical.


3 .Which part of the classical argument did you use the best? Which part could be improved?
a) I think that my confirmation is the strongest part in my 1st draft because I gave various persuasive and logical supporting ideas.

b) I think that my introduction should be improved because my introduction used only boring saying to grab audience. Only this way can't grab the audience enough.


4. what's your strategy for your next draft?
a) Make more creative attention grabber in introduction
b) Write concession.
c) Remove repeated part in my essay and make draft more logical and simpler.
d) Emphasis my alternative - neobehaviorism.